Showing posts with label Thomas Nelson Publishers. Show all posts
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Friday, 28 March 2014

DECEPTIO (Excerpt

A week after his encounter with George in Lafayette Park, Morton walked into of the lobby of the Grand Hyatt Washington on 1000 H Street Northwest. He walked toward the bank of lifts and waited with a group of people for one of the cars to come down. As one of the doors opened, he moved with the people into the elevator to be taken up to the third floor. He tried to keep from bumping into the others in the car as his arm still hurt where George had shot him.
Stepping out on the third floor corridor, he looked to his left and his right to see if there was anyone watching else there. He looked at the numbers on the door trying to make out in which direction he needed to go. Turning to his left, he walked down the corridor looking for Room 316. For a moment, he wondered whether the room was still unoccupied. Standing in front of the door, he pulled out the electronic key card he had removed from George’s pocket. He inserted the card in the slot and swiped it. For a moment, he wondered whether the card would work. A moment later, the light on the lock turned from red to green and the door opened. He walked into the door and shut it behind him.
He stood there looking around the room and letting his eyes adjust to the darkness. The room looked unoccupied and the curtains were still drawn over the window. He searched for and found the light switch and flipped it. Light from recessed bulbs flooded the room. The bed was made and there were fresh flowers on the table next to the chair by the window. He walked to the wardrobe and opened it. It was empty. He stepped back from the wardrobe to search the room. He didn’t find anything.
For a moment, he wondered whether George had come all the way to Washington without any luggage but he immediately dismissed the idea. He would have come with at least a change of clothing but there was nothing like that to be found in the room. It was a week since Gorge had come into the room. The most likely thing was that the hotel staff had since come in to clean the room they had taken away whatever luggage was there because another guest wanted to use the room. If that was the case, then the luggage was with the hotel staff, waiting for him to come back and claim it. That meant he was going to have to go down and claim the bag by himself. All he needed was a good story.


Two hours later, Morton walked back into the lobby of the hotel with the intention of claiming George’s luggage, if he had any. He hoped that none of the staff, especially those working in the lobby, would recognize him as someone who had been in the hotel earlier that day. He walked up to one of the receptionists and introduced himself.
“Good afternoon,” he said to the woman standing behind the table, a bright smile on his face.
“Good afternoon sir, how may I help you?” She had an even brighter smile.
“I have a small problem and I was wondering if you could help me in sorting it out.” She nodded encouragingly and he continued. “My name is Sergeant Todd Morton of the 1st Marine Division. One of my superior officers, Major George Kowolski was in your hotel like a week ago but he was called away unexpectedly on a matter of national security. He was unable to settle his bill or pack his things before he left. It was all hush-hush and required the utmost haste. Now my commanding officer has instructed me to come here and retrieve his things and settle his bill. How do I go about doing that?”
The woman nodded. “What room was he in and when did he check in?”
“He was in Room 316. I’m not exactly sure of the day but it was probably Monday or Tuesday last week.”
‘Let me see.” The woman typed on the keyboard in front of her and then read the words on the screen. “There was a George Kowolski in Room 316 and he checked in on Monday evening,” she said. “He was supposed to stay the night and check out Tuesday afternoon but as you said, he didn’t check out.”
“Thank you so much,” he said smiling. He retrieved his wallet from his pocket and extracted a credit card. “Could you please charge the hotel bill to this card?”
“Certainly sir,” the woman said as she collected the card. She went to a corner and a few minutes later came back with the card and a form. “If you could just sign here sir,” she said pointing to a spot on the form. Morton took the pen she offered and signed on the line. After he had finished, he smiled at her again. “Thank you so much for your help. Then suddenly, he frowned. “I’m sorry for taking up your time, but if he had any luggage, would it still be in the room?”
“No. It would have been taken down to the lost baggage section since the occupant was supposed to have checked out.”
“Can you give me directions on how to get there?”
Five minutes later, he was seated on a leather settee in the lost items section of the hotel, waiting for them to retrieve George’s luggage. He had presented to them his copy of the credit card form to show that he had settled the bill. He only hoped no one would come along asking for more identification before it was released. He didn’t know if the people George worked for had also thought about retrieving his things. If they hadn’t, he wanted to be gone from the hotel before they got round to it.
“Sergeant Morton?”
Morton stood up. “Yes?”
“Here’s what we could find for Major Kowolski.” The man held out a hold-all of intermediate size.

Morton took it from him, weighing it in his hands. “Thank you so much,” he said. “I’m very grateful.” Carrying the hold-all, he walked back to the lobby and out of the hotel where he hailed a taxi to take him to the motel on 31st Street Northwest where he was staying. Throughout the journey, he kept staring at the rear-view mirror to see if he was being followed.  

Monday, 2 December 2013

We Are Accepted In The Beloved

From a young age I always wanted to write and be a published and well known author. When I published my first novel, Deceptio with WestBowPress, a division of Thomas Nelson Publishers, I didn't really know anything about things like literary agents, proposals or platforms. That means I really didn't know much about publishing, period. However, publishing Deceptio did not put an end to the dream I had of being paid to publish a novel with a major publishing house. I then wrote another novel, Lost But Found. By this time I knew a little about how things worked. I had bought Michael Hyatt’s book on how to write a winning fiction proposal. I sent out proposals to several literary agents. As you would expect, I got a lot of “No’s”. Some didn't reply. In the end, near the end of last year, I finally found someone who liked what I had written and I was told that my work was going to be presented to the people in charge at the agency. I was so excited. I waited to get feedback but meanwhile I must confess I had a few dreams about how much I was going to get offered and how many copies of the book I was going to sell. When I didn't hear back by February, I sent a mail. I got a reply saying that a mail had been sent to me earlier (which I never received) saying the people in charge wanted to go in another direction. Whatever that means.

I also love the law very much and I love litigating. I love the thought of presenting my arguments in such a way that the judge agrees with my line of thinking. And I love winning. However, I felt I was in a rut at work and I felt there were no opportunities for advancement. So I wrote a few applications and sent them to some of the top law firms in my city. Most of them didn't bother to reply. Those that did sent me a mail telling me that after considering my application they didn't think I would be a fit for them. I would be the first to admit that my grades in my law school exam were not the best. So maybe my grades wouldn't look too good on their website. But I thought that the almost ten years of experience I had garnered should count for something. I guess I was wrong.

I'm not going to lie, the two instances of rejection hurt. Badly. But that is what people do, people reject us. If we let it, the rejection we get from people can hurt us and damage us for life. Rejection can make us feel small and unworthy and unlovable. Rejection can make us give up on our dreams. But you know what? Men may reject us because we don’t fit into a certain mould or we don’t fit into a certain picture they have of how they think we should be. But you know what? That’s okay. That’s life. If we are afraid of rejection and we don’t want to experience it, we will end up not living because life is full of rejection. But you know another thing? I'm thankful there’s a God who loves me and would never reject me. I'm thankful there’s a God who has accepted me warts and all. The Bible says God has accepted me in the beloved. God has accepted me, not because of anything I can or will ever do but because of what Jesus did on the cross of Calvary.  So no matter the rejection I face from men, I know God loves me.

So, has the fact that literary agents aren't breaking down my door in a bid to represent my work discouraged me? No. It has made me even more determined to succeed and get a book published by a major publisher. That’s why I'm not going to stop writing. There’s a song I love titled “More Than It Seems”. It’s by the group Kutless. There’s a verse that says, “Passing through the darkness into my own world will I, be more than when I left”. That verse has given me an idea for another novel. And when I'm done and I've written the best novel I can write, I'm going to write proposals and send to literary agents again. And I'm not going to stop till I get a 'Yes". Has the fact that some people think I don’t fit into their law firm made me doubt my abilities as a lawyer? No. Because I know that God and I make a good team. Recently, I have even begun to get leadings that maybe it’s time I and a few friends opened our own law firm.

Am I afraid of rejection? Yes. Am I afraid of failing? Yes. Then why am I going to put myself in the position of being hurt or rejected again? Because I know this is what I was born to do. To deal in words. And there’s nothing that is going to stop me fulfilling what I know to be my purpose. Not even fear. Because God loves me, he’s on my side and he’s cheering me on. And I believe like Paul said, that everything works together for our good. Even rejection.

What fear will you surmount?


JC Cruz is the author of DECEPTIO published by WestBowPress, a division of Thomas Nelson publishers, http://bookstore.westbowpress.com/Products/SKU000194087/Deceptio.aspx and LOST, BUT FOUND available at http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00DPLLEUQ/. You can follow him on Twitter @Cruz_JCReal. 



Friday, 16 November 2012

DECEPTIO (Excerpt)

“Maxwell, what are we doing here? Why are we stopping?” he asked, his tone rising. “I thought I said that I wanted to go home?”
“Let’s just say that you’re not going home yet. At least not until you answer some questions. And then, maybe not ever.”
“Who are you? You’re not Maxwell,” Rankin shouted.
“You’re very perceptive aren’t you? Somebody give the man a prize.”
“If what you’re after is money, I don’t have any on me so you’ve made a mistake.” Rankin said even as he tried to open the door. The door refused to open.
“Don’t bother trying. It’s locked from here. And that’s a very wrong this to tell someone who wants money. He might think you have no value for your life.”
The mention of his life stopped Rankin cold. “Are you here to kill me? I can assure you that if you kill me, the FBI will track you down and you’ll burn for murder. You can’t kill a United States senator and expect to get away with it.”
“Well someone killed Robert Partridge and he’s still at large. The FBI haven’t caught him and I don’t think they will.”
The mention of Robert Partridge’s name made Rankin break out in a cold sweat. Either the guy knew something or he was fishing. “Who are you? What do you know about Robert Partridge?”  
Morton turned and pointed a gun at Rankin making the other man cringe. “George sends his greetings. He would have loved to be here but he couldn’t make it.”
“You killed him didn’t you?”
“Let’s just say it was a case of him or me. And like I said, I need some questions answered or you just might join him.”
“What do you want to know?”
“Why do you people want to kill Susan Partridge?”
Rankin was taken aback. “Wherever did you get that idea from?”
“It’s quite obvious that someone or a group of people are behind her sudden rise. It seems to me like some people are building her up so that they can make a statement with her death. Why do you want to kill her?”
“I don’t know where you got that idea from but nothing could be further from the truth,” Rankin said. It was quite obvious that the man knew nothing and he was only fishing.
“What do you have to gain by killing her? What are you people after?”
“Really,” Rankin said smiling, “I don’t know where you got all your ideas from. We have nothing whatsoever to gain from Susan Partridge’s death. I don’t know what you intend to gain by all this but don’t you think that you should let me go before the police catch you?”
“What about if I tortured you? I’m sure I have enough time to break a few of your fingers or your jaw. That should get you talking.”
Rankin blanched. “You wouldn’t.”
“So if you’re not trying to kill her and there’s no plot to kill her, why don’t you tell me what connection there is between you and George.”
“Because of my work, I know a lot of people, some of whom I can’t remember where I met them,” Rankin said smiling. “I really can’t remember where I met George or put a face with the name.”
“Isn’t it quite interesting that the same person whom you can’t remember had your number as the only number on his phone? And it shows that he called you when he arrived in Washington.”
Rankin shrugged. “He called me but I didn’t remember him. He wanted us to meet up so that we could catch up on old times but we never met. Because you killed him.”
Morton had a strong desire to do something to wipe the smirk off Rankin’s face. He released the safety catch of the gun and leaned forward to press the gun into his temple. “Since you know that I killed George, then you should be aware that I won’t have any compunction about putting a bullet through your skull.”
“But the question is “Will you”? Let me give you a piece of advice. You’re way in over your head here whoever you are. The best thing would be for you to stop pushing your nose into areas where you have no business. That kind of thing is what gets people killed.”
It was Morton’s turn to smile. “So now you’re threatening me?”
“I wouldn’t put it that way,” Rankin said. “Like I said, it’s advice. You either take it or leave it.”
Morton looked at him intently. “I’ll leave it. Could you pass a message to your people for me? Rankin continued staring at him without acknowledging that he heard or understood the question. “Tell them it’s not over. I’m watching.”
With that, he opened the door and stepped out of the car into the dark night.



JC Cruz is the author of DECEPTIO. The book is published by WestBow Press (www.westbowpress.com) , a division of Thomas Nelson Publishers.

Friday, 27 July 2012

While we wait ...

"But let patience have her perfect work, that you may be perfect and entire, wanting nothing." - James 1: 4

"Patience is not the ability to wait, but how you act while you're waiting." - Joyce Meyer.

There are things in our lives that we are hoping on God for. When the Bible talks of waiting patiently for God, the idea most of us have is that of waiting at the bus stop of life twiddling our thumbs hoping that God does his "magic". That gives us an out and lets us off the hook with regard to taking responsibility for our lives. Nothing could be farther from the truth.

Patience in the context of the Bible has nothing to do whatsoever with being idle. Even as we wait for God for certain things that our out of our hands which only he can provide, there are things we need to do. Reading and meditating on the word as revealed in the Bible is one of the things we need to do while waiting patiently. Through the word, we build up our faith and our trust in God. Through the word we gain insight and receive revelation on what to do. Through the word, we find inspiration for living one day at a time.

Prayer is one of the things we need to continue to do in the time of of waiting. Going to sleep will not bring what we are trusting God for any faster. Neither will worrying about it. Prayer will help to build our faith and hope that what we are hoping for will come. In prayer, we receive direction. Through prayer we might even find out the solution to that problem we are waiting on God to "supernaturally" solve.

Another thing we need to do while waiting is to act in faith. The Bible at James 2:20 reminds us "that faith without works is dead." When we are believing on God for something, there are corresponding actions we need to take to show God that we are ready for what we believe he is about to do. Using myself as an example, I believe that God has called me not only to be a lawyer and do justice, but he has also called me to write books. From following people like Michael Hyatt the Chairman of Thomas Nelson Publishers on Twitter, I have come to understand that getting published is not all cut and dried as I would like it to be. While I have written a novel, I don't know whether someone will think it's good enough to represent as a literary agent let alone publish. I have sent proposals out and I have already received two rejections. (It seems there is an opinion that unless you have been rejected many times, you're not really a writer yet). I have told myself that because of what I believe, I am not going to let a rejection stop me. I am going to keep sending proposals out because I believe that someone will have faith enough in my work to represent me. I have also told myself that I am going to keep writing novels, in the hope that I'll get better at it and I might just write something someone wants to represent. That is my act of faith by my works.

What else do you think one needs to do while waiting patiently?